An AI model was given the prompt: 'Explain the water cycle to a 5th grader.' It produced the following response:

'The water cycle, or hydrologic cycle, describes the continuous movement of water on, above, and below the surface of the Earth. It involves key processes such as evaporation, where liquid water becomes water vapor; condensation, where water vapor cools and turns into liquid water, forming clouds; precipitation, where water is released from clouds in the form of rain, snow, sleet, or hail; and collection, where water that falls from the clouds collects in rivers, lakes, and oceans. Transpiration from plants also contributes significantly to atmospheric water vapor.'

While factually correct, this response is not well-suited for the intended audience. Write a single, concise feedback statement that would be most effective in guiding the model to generate a better response in its next attempt. Your feedback should be specific and actionable.